I wish I knew more about SGA so I could actually make a decent commment. I got the feeling while reading this that I was missing out on a whole lot, but in a way, that's a good feeling, because that means you really know what you're talking about. Just in general though, I liked the way you wrote your characters. I liked the dialogue, and the way everyone acted, and I liked best how you made their strong friendship so evident in everything they did and said.