oh, wow, this is great! I just came here via a link on trobadora's journal, and am I ever glad I did. It's so rare to see Sheppard and McKay written as women in such a subtle, convincing way; I really feel like you make the point about how their lives are different without coming off as preachy and without dumbing it down. It's a smart little character piece, too; your choice to write a post-The Storm/The Eye story is quite insightful, I think.

I'm not expressing myself properly, but: yes, this is wonderful. Sensitive and interesting and head and shoulders above any other they-were-always-girls fic I've seen in the fandom.